I decided to change the ending of my short film. This was because my original version didn't suggest a definite ending and was left too open. I therefore decided to end it when Abdul is being surrounded by his friends, when lying on the kitchen floor.
I reckon this short film has been directed pretty well, and the story line is good and simple. The background music went really well with what was happening =]
i think you done a great job and it all came together really well. the music and shots were brilliant and you showed good use of technology and effects.
I reckon this short film has been directed pretty well, and the story line is good and simple. The background music went really well with what was happening =]
ReplyDeletethe simple shots and the background music make it all come together b-e-a-utifully
ReplyDeleteA great short film with some nice editing. Job well done :)
ReplyDeletethe short film is reallllllllly goood
ReplyDeletei think you done a great job and it all came together really well. the music and shots were brilliant and you showed good use of technology and effects.
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